An Argumentative Essay~!!

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Today I want to write an argumentative Essay.

This is not as easy as it seems. An argumentative essay requires more time and research than a response essay. The writer must support the arguments with facts and evidence, not just opinions and feelings. 

I wrote and argumentative essay about our first female president, Park Geun Hye.

     On December 19th 2012, we had a new president in South Korea. When we look at the presidents, they are all male presidents. However, this time it was a female president. Her name was Park Geun Hye. Some people say that she should not be president because she is a woman and she didn't get married. However, I disagree. Park Geun Hye would be a good president for South Korea because of several reasons. 

     One reason why Park Geun Hye is a good president is because she has a lot of experience of politics. She is the Saenuri Party Unity Committee chairman. Also she was a member of many groups that are big in South Korea. She was the lawmaker of South Korea. Besides this, since she was young, she started to practice being a good politic because Park Geun Hye really wanted to become president.

     Another reason why Park Geun Hye is a good president is because her father and family was a president is because her father and her family members was a president or a politician. father was also the South Korea's president for 2 times in 1972 until 1979. Park Geun Hye's father changed South Korea a lot so our country developed until here. Even though her father did things that the citizen didn't like, because of this, we could be in the most developed country in the world. In addition, Park Geun Hye's younger brother is in the Korean Football Association.   

     Some people say that Park Geun Hye is bad because of her father as I said before, but it is not true. Even though her father did things that is not correct, there is nothing that says that also Park Geun Hye would do a bad job being a president. She might have learn those things from her father because they are one family. However, she would know that people would not like her. Therefore she would try to fix it and become a better president so she can make a better country.

     Finally, Park Geun Hye is not only a bad person because when she don't have a family, she can concentrate on her work more easily. The reason why she didn't got married is because that she only wanted to focus on being a president for South Korea. Also the reason why I say she could focus on her work better is because she has nothing else to focus on than her work. Park Geun Hye don't have to worry about her husband and her children and there education. Therefore, she could become a good president in South Korea.

     In conclusion, Park Geun Hye is a good person because she has more experience with politics than other people, her father was also a politician in South Korea, she might not do bad things like what her father did, and she can concentrate on her work more better. For these reasons, we should not say that Park Geun Hye is only a bad person, but a good person. We should get rid of the thoughts that is wrong! We should not only criticize Park Geun Hye!!

This is an argumentative essay I wrote. This is about 500 words. It doesn't have to be too long. If you have time, I hope you could write your own essay!

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